Friday, May 22, 2009

A metaphor wrapped in irony?

No one ever warned me
About the ones with big brown eyes
Wide smiles and what they're hiding
Behind teeth words release motives
I never saw coming

I could drown in your eyes
But they're too shallow to tread
Wait now stop a second
How can I describe your perfection

You've become such a part of the music
I think you've grown bass strings for hair

I am arrested in this state of mind
My mind is arrested in this situation
Brown eyes and bass strings for hair
White smiles and what they're hiding
No one ever warned me, I never saw it coming

2 comments:

Ella Enchanted said...

this could possibly be my favorite so far.
I keep reading and rereading the last stanza. it's perfect.

XupXinXarmsX said...

Your awesome, you made my day by saying that, I really enjoyed writing it.