I couldnt sleep last night so I ended up rewriting the shadows traced on walls poem. I think this is an improvement, im not really sure. But this is what happens when your up at 4 a.m. with words stuck in your head. I also retitled it, the title is still a reference to the book Choke by Chuck Palahniuk.
Nothing feels real anymore
Im not taking the time to care anymore
Now that your gone
Im just a loser that's gone
Astray
I can't be all alone
Don't leave me all alone
I lost the strength to go home
and nothing feels real anymore
You just don't care anymore
I can still feel you inside of me
Just try to say bye to me,
why are you so tired of me
Cause nothing feels real anymore
There's no time anymore
Cause I can't be alone
You left me alone, ask me
is this Better, ask me is this better
Cause nothing feels real anymore
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